Maximize the power of temperature to craft a more powerful story.
Turn the temperature up for fiery anger or sizzling passion. Turn it down for icy moods, frosty dialog, or chilling foreshadowing.
- reveal mood
- reveal a character’s emotion
- be a plot device
- reveal a character’s personality
- be thematic
- be a setting
The Great Gatsby is loaded with heat. Tom is a hot head ( personality trait). Gatsby is hot for Daisy ( desire/intent). Tom is hot for Myrtle (personality trait) and hot with anger (emotion) when he discovers Daisy’s infidelity. Myrtle is hot ( desire/intent) to be wealthy. Gatsby made all his money on hot goods (plot). Myrtle’s husband is hot ( emotion) to murder his wife’s killer. It’s a hot summer day (setting). The rising temperature mirrors the rising anger and lust of the characters. The heat is an excuse for the characters to leave East Egg ( plot ) and go into the city where conflict blazes! (mood)
Warm, summery, tropical, broiling, boiling, searing, blistering, sweltering, torrid, sultry, humid, muggy, roasting, baking, scorching, scalding, searing, heated, red-hot, steamy
Heat can refer to:
- personality ( a warm personality)
Cold may refer to
- lack of emotion
- probability–It will be a cold day in hell when I forgive you.
chilly, chill, cool, freezing, icy, nippy, wintry, frosty, frigid, bitter, biting raw, bone-chilling, arctic, frozen, numb, shivery
Where can you add heat/cold to turn up/down your story’s emotional temperature?
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